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Oct 24, 2012 16:17 |  #1

Some more from a lovely day out in the countryside

This way, boys!

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I love this because he looks like he is flying :)
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My 2 year old shouting 'gangnam style' and dancing on the trampoline with his cousin hehe.

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Oct 24, 2012 19:08 |  #2

I like these


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Oct 24, 2012 19:36 |  #3

Your strongest shot is the "flying one". Nice eye contact, more room on the correct side.

"This way boys" suffers like most pictures of people with their backs to you. There is little to engage the eyes.

In the trampoline one, you have them facing the edge of the frame. A stronger composition would have them facing into the shot. The eye is drawn to where they're facing. So you have a lot of useless space on the right side.


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Oct 24, 2012 21:19 |  #4

+1 for Gangnam style :D

I actually like the first one, it leads me down the road. Second shot is great!

The third one, I agree with joedlh on this one. What about a portrait crop on this one? Might do the trick.

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Oct 24, 2012 23:39 |  #5

I love #3!

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Although I do wish the boys were either centered or to the right side of the frame.

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Oct 25, 2012 01:02 |  #6

Thanks for the comments :)

I guess I like one as it's taken as if I am following them along the road.

The third one I will try different crops, There is a boy stood to the left of them (you can see the shadow) so I can't have any more space that side but will try reducing the right, thanks!


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