end of the night
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chris250 Member 198 posts Joined Oct 2007 Location: Ayrshire, Scotland More info | Nov 03, 2012 15:30 | #1 IMAGE LINK: http://www.flickr.com/photos/chr154bes/8151454097/ end of the night opinions?
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emelvee Goldmember 1,871 posts Joined Apr 2009 Location: E-town, Canada More info | Nov 04, 2012 23:08 | #4 She looks sad ... it's her wedding day! Canon RP | Canon 6D | 70-200 f/2.8 I | 50mm f/1.4 | 16-35mm f/2.8 II | 580EX II x 2
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ChristopherStevenb Goldmember 3,547 posts Likes: 7 Joined Dec 2008 Location: Ottawa, Canada More info | Nov 05, 2012 00:03 | #5 I think the post-processing, composition, light, background, are all kind of irrelevant if the content of the image doesn't contribute to the narrative you are showing in the photos overall. Yes, you can say that this moment shows the bride tired at the end of the wedding--not only would this be true, but it also works within a standard narrative. The problem is that these might not be sufficient if the image itself just seems to suggest sadness. In other words, if I took this shot, I'd have to ask: would the bride enjoy seeing this image. It's totally possible she would; I'm not sure.
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Nov 05, 2012 20:44 | #6 Too much clutter on the right and lighting is a bit flat.
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alquimista Cream of the Crop More info | Nov 05, 2012 20:46 | #7 it needs to pop more, looks a bit flat la costura de Dios
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p27rpy Goldmember 1,418 posts Likes: 33 Joined Oct 2010 More info | Nov 05, 2012 21:37 | #8 sorry, not digging this one. looks like she's collapsed in anguish somewhere, lol. Theo Civitello - Houston Based Automotive, Wedding & Life Photography
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dawssvt Senior Member 406 posts Likes: 9 Joined Oct 2009 More info | Nov 06, 2012 00:37 | #9 It seems a little underexposed! St. Louis, MO Portrait and Wedding Photographer
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erikfig Goldmember 2,151 posts Likes: 203 Joined May 2012 Location: Orlando, FL More info |
Nov 07, 2012 19:45 | #11 I somewhat doubt that was the actual end of the night , Bodies: X-T1, E-M1ii, G9 Lenses: µ.Z 7-14 2.8, µ.Z 12-40 2.8, µ.Z 25 1.2, X 18-55 2.8-4, µ.Z 40-150 2.8, µ.Z 45 1.2, µ.Z 60 2.8, µ.Z 75 1.8, PL 200 2.8
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supernova74 Senior Member 957 posts Likes: 12 Joined Jan 2010 Location: Adelaide, Australia More info | Nov 08, 2012 05:13 | #12 Theres nothing in the photo that tells me its the end of the night. She just looks like an unhappy bride Mark
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SeanPierre Member 99 posts Joined Feb 2011 More info | Nov 13, 2012 16:51 | #13 |
Nov 14, 2012 09:08 | #14 Christopher Steven b wrote in post #15208019 I think the post-processing, composition, light, background, are all kind of irrelevant if the content of the image doesn't contribute to the narrative you are showing in the photos overall. Yes, you can say that this moment shows the bride tired at the end of the wedding--not only would this be true, but it also works within a standard narrative. The problem is that these might not be sufficient if the image itself just seems to suggest sadness. In other words, if I took this shot, I'd have to ask: would the bride enjoy seeing this image. It's totally possible she would; I'm not sure. What I think you were trying to do in the image is to show a rare moment when the bride is alone--a moment of possible inner reflection on the day. That's cool, and rare to grab, I find. But I think this would have worked better if, say, you could see the party going on behind her somehow--some hints that this image is like a little window of quiet in the swirl of action that is probably going on around her. spoken for the truth. Canon 5DmkIV | Canon 16-35 F2.8L II, Canon 100 F2.8L Macro, Canon 135 F2L, Canon 24-70 F2.8L II, Canon 70-200 F2.8L IS II, Sigma 50 F1.4 ART, Sigma 85 F1.4, | Canon 600 RT, Canon 580 EXII, Canon 430 EXII | Radiopopper JrX's
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