1st Maternity Shoot for a friend....

Well...You have to start somewhere.

The first thing that jumped out at me is composition. You really have to look at your picture before you press the shutter button. The pier and rides do nothing for the session and detract from what the session is all about. In #4 it looks like she's pooping a lifeguard house.

In the dark ones, her face is much different from her belly in terms of color.

I think the only decent one you have is the last one, but even it's too hot.


Keep shooting though, it's your first time, and I'm sure they appreciate the pics, but on a photography website, you're going to get a bit hammered for these.