Critique my city panorama please

So , was making a panorama. but dont know what's wrong with it. stitched 6 photos to make this one
But i dont know hwy it dont look cool
maybe its autumn and the grass isnt green. tried everything. black n white/ some vintage effects. didnt work.
so its here.
what wud u guys do to make it better.
how wud u treat it .

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Looks like way to much vibrance and yellows (esp in your post above). I am not sure what the colour should be but you might want to play with Hue and Saturation, Vibrance and Selective Colour (Photoshop)to tone down the yellows.

Orig was from your Flickr account:

To me the lack of a focal point, distortion, and blown highlights killed it for me.

Here's my take on it:

You need some strong point of interest. A good deal of your foreground is pretty boring. The high vantage point looking down also doesn't help either. Perhaps try using a longer lens next time.

What city is this?

thanks for such nice comments. helps me alot
thansk guys
nad @gonzogolf, the city is Mansehra, located in KPK region, Pakistan

I think gonzogolf put it in perspective, less forground and a longer lens.