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Critique my city panorama please

 
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Nov 08, 2012 12:34 |  #1

So , was making a panorama. but dont know what's wrong with it. stitched 6 photos to make this one
But i dont know hwy it dont look cool
maybe its autumn and the grass isnt green. tried everything. black n white/ some vintage effects. didnt work.
so its here.
what wud u guys do to make it better.
how wud u treat it .

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Nov 08, 2012 12:59 |  #2

Looks like way to much vibrance and yellows (esp in your post above). I am not sure what the colour should be but you might want to play with Hue and Saturation, Vibrance and Selective Colour (Photoshop)to tone down the yellows.

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Nov 08, 2012 15:01 |  #3

To me the lack of a focal point, distortion, and blown highlights killed it for me.

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Nov 08, 2012 15:08 |  #4

You need some strong point of interest. A good deal of your foreground is pretty boring. The high vantage point looking down also doesn't help either. Perhaps try using a longer lens next time.

What city is this?




  
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Nov 08, 2012 15:30 |  #5

thanks for such nice comments. helps me alot
thansk guys
nad @gonzogolf, the city is Mansehra, located in KPK region, Pakistan


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Nov 09, 2012 01:16 |  #6

I think gonzogolf put it in perspective, less forground and a longer lens.


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