Autumn Portrait Sessions With Friend

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You have some nice shots of a lovely girl - I'll bet she's not just a friend. I like #4 best; but you might lighten the shadows under her eyes a bit. #8 & #9 look overexposed - her face is too bright. #10 & 11 white balance looks off and in #11 there's a funny glare spot on top of her head that you could clone out.

Next time try to get a full smile showing some teeth and some plain dress without fur to highlight her lovely hair.

Nice work overall.

I feel that the focus misses on most all of them in some way. The light is most is very bright, and the white balance is all over the place.Vignettes don't add to the last ones for me. I think learning more about light,composition,WB will really give you a boost with future endeavours
The 6th is my favorite( I see they were re organized), no gimmicks, no heavy processing, just a lovely image of a beauty. This is what you need to focus on for sure!

The second shot's my favorite. Several others are also very nice, but to add to what Flo said, several look soft in the eyes and there are some color issues. 5 (the black and white shot) and 6 would be killer images if her eyes were sharper.

Flo wrote in post #15240754
I feel that the focus misses on most all of them in some way. The light is most is very bright, and the white balance is all over the place.Vignettes don't add to the last ones for me. I think learning more about light,composition,WB will really give you a boost with future endeavours
The third to last is my favorite, no gimmicks, no heavy processing, just a lovely image of a beauty. This is what you need to focus on for sure!

Agree with Flo - but not sure about focus.

I will add that exposure is all over the place too. #6 is my favorite. It looks to have good WB, OK exposure, and a reasonably good pose.

And she is a lovely young lady...and she does have an intriguing smile - almost dangerous. In a very good way.