This is a picture of my firend, we took Saturday...
Tought I share it with you guys, nothing special, but would like some opinions.
It was taken with a Canon 40D and a 50mm f/1.8.
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Nov 19, 2012 13:55 | #1 This is a picture of my firend, we took Saturday...
Roland | Amateur Photographer
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jasio Senior Member 788 posts Likes: 37 Joined Sep 2011 More info | Nov 19, 2012 14:14 | #2 Pretty model, pretty composition and pretty colors.
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UKseagull Senior Member  More info | Nov 19, 2012 14:15 | #3 I think it's a very nice image. flickr
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gonzogolf dumb remark memorialized More info | Nov 19, 2012 14:17 | #4 I only have one niggling little criticism. It looks like the farthest eye is sharper than then closer one. When shooting that close with a wide open lens you can sometimes get the DOF too shallow. If she were facing you with her eyes square it wouldnt be an issue, but that would be a different photo.
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Nov 19, 2012 14:56 | #5 gonzogolf wrote in post #15264614  I only have one niggling little criticism. It looks like the farthest eye is sharper than then closer one. When shooting that close with a wide open lens you can sometimes get the DOF too shallow. If she were facing you with her eyes square it wouldnt be an issue, but that would be a different photo. It was shot with f/2.8. Roland | Amateur Photographer
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gonzogolf dumb remark memorialized More info | Nov 19, 2012 14:58 | #6 NemethR wrote in post #15264791 It was shot with f/2.8. On the actual image the eyes are equally sharp  But thank you for the feedback. btw: Those eyes are not Photoshopped. The actual image as opposed to what? 2.8 still might not be enough.
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BDKR Member  196 posts Likes: 5 Joined Sep 2011 Location: Tempe, AZ More info | Nov 19, 2012 14:58 | #7 gonzogolf wrote in post #15264614 I only have one niggling little criticism. It looks like the farthest eye is sharper than then closer one. When shooting that close with a wide open lens you can sometimes get the DOF too shallow. If she were facing you with her eyes square it wouldnt be an issue, but that would be a different photo. I caught that as well, but the more I look at it, I think it might be the catch in her far eye closest to her ear, if you will, and the apparent 'darkness' in the white of her near eye. 7D,5Dii, EF70-200/2.8L ISII, EF24-105L, EF50/1.8, EFS10-22, EF85/1.8, Strobes/SpeedLites and imagination. Oh, and an empty wallet
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gdykstra Goldmember  1,330 posts Best ofs: 1 Likes: 190 Joined May 2007 Location: Duluth, Georgia More info | Nov 19, 2012 16:24 | #8 At first I thought the eyes were Photoshopped to appear bluer, but looking at the image I just think your white balance is off. The reason for this is because the whites of her eyes have a blue tint to them and the scarf, which appears to be black and white, the white also has a bluish tint. Anyway it is a nice Fall image, Model Mayhem
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russ71satellite Goldmember  More info | Nov 19, 2012 20:21 | #10 Very nice image. I like the colors and composition. On my monitor I also see a tinge of blue on the whites of her eyes. Pretty shot though! Canon EOS 5D, 85mm 1.8, 50mm 1.8, Yongnuo YN560II, Dynaphos strobe, 16 inch beauty dish, Vagabond mini.
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Nov 20, 2012 00:57 | #11 White balance might be off. Roland | Amateur Photographer
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stsva Cream of the Crop  More info | Nov 21, 2012 11:23 | #12 NemethR wrote in post #15266850 White balance might be off. To be honest, I tried to adjust it to her skin tone, so if the whites in her eyes would be more white, then her skin would be too yellow. You could try just dropping the blue saturation some, although I think you could "fix" this with a WB adjustment without getting unnatural skin tones. Some Canon stuff and a little bit of Yongnuo.
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Numenorean Cream of the Crop 5,013 posts Likes: 28 Joined Feb 2011 More info | Nov 21, 2012 13:10 | #13 Looks soft and not quite sure about the leaf in front of her face. Not too bad though.
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poloman Cream of the Crop  5,442 posts Likes: 7 Joined Dec 2006 Location: Southern Illinois More info | Nov 24, 2012 12:14 | #14 White balance is off. "All those who believe in psychokinesis, raise my right hand!" Steven Wright
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GALLAGHER Member 34 posts Joined Oct 2011 Location: Sioux Falls, SD More info | Dec 02, 2012 21:56 | #15 Agreed. Adjust the white balance and you are golden. Keep on working, It can only get better from here.
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