Waimea Valley, Hawaii - Under the canopy

I really liked this perspective, but have some mixed thoughts about it as it sort of appears too busy after looking at it for a while. Thoughts?

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It is pretty busy - I wish there was more of a focal point.

is this the only picture you took?

stanclark wrote in post #15266392
is this the only picture you took?

Now that's funny!

the purple sun flare is no good.

I think for a shot like this to work it needs to have the detail showing on the bark of the trees...more dark on the outside of the canopy and lighter on the inside.
This looks like your trying to capture whats on the outside of the canopy...through the canopy.

Yes Dave I really asked....sounds really bad....

picturepages wrote in post #15270995
the purple sun flare is no good.

I think for a shot like this to work it needs to have the detail showing on the bark of the trees...more dark on the outside of the canopy and lighter on the inside.
This looks like your trying to capture whats on the outside of the canopy...through the canopy.

I see detail in the bark of the trees. I think the focal point in this is the business itself.
I agree that the flare is not working though. You might try b&w with this.