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Canada in October - Black & White

 
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Nov 20, 2012 11:03 |  #1

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5. Johnson Canyon
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6. Johnson Canyon
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Nov 20, 2012 21:31 |  #2

Not bad. Scenes like these can and will often look nice. Your work may have potential.


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Nov 20, 2012 21:40 |  #3

Nice.
Contrast is a bit of issue (Too high on most).
Third image, really lovely but has some PP problem.


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Nov 21, 2012 00:04 |  #4

I think 1 & 2 would benefit from putting some detail in the shadows (trees).


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Nov 21, 2012 00:07 as a reply to  @ Qbx's post |  #5

Nice scenes, but most are too contrasty...Lacking shadow detail.


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Nov 21, 2012 07:48 |  #6

Yeah, I can see that I blew out the bottom of the photo a bit too much on that third shot.

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Nov 21, 2012 10:05 |  #7

I like 1 and 2 (1 the best) but there's a fair amount of grain/noise that should be dealt with.
3 doesn't do much for me.
4 is neat but the car and person in the BG is distracting
5 and 6 are both underexposed.


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Nov 22, 2012 14:20 |  #8

last one has real potemtial. damn, would love to be there an take some shots myself.


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Nov 23, 2012 13:00 |  #9

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Great shots! Not sure where you are in Canada but where I am in Canada it is considerably warmer!


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