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Nov 30, 2012 08:28 |  #1

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Nov 30, 2012 12:10 |  #2

These are all underexposed.

The first is too centered and I'd like to see the rest of the lower structure. It's the most interesting of the three pictures.

The second is too centered and seems to need an adjustment to the horizon tilt.

The third isn't very interesting.

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Dec 07, 2012 02:12 |  #3

I like the shots man. personally I'd have made them a bit less under-exposed, but, I love the first one, its interesting


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Dec 07, 2012 05:10 |  #4

Definitely underexposed. That white paint on the towers needs to look white, not gray.


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Dec 07, 2012 05:18 |  #5

Your monitor is set too bright turn it down, these will print out black splodges.
Apart from that, I suppose you had to be there.


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