placidbabe Member 75 posts Joined Nov 2009 Location: Australia, NSW More info | Dec 01, 2012 01:41 | #1 Hi  2.  3. I tried to add a little texture here. Does it look OK?  Thank you for your time  Skye.
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Dec 01, 2012 03:40 | #2 Yes, I think you did very well changing to a warmer tone. Lovely model too! You might try brightening her eyes in all these shots though. -- Image Editing OK --
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rrblint Listen! .... do you smell something?  More info | Yes, warmer tone is a marked improvement...A little fill flash would brighten her face and add a catchlight to her eyes...Lovely model! Mark
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boerewors Goldmember  1,948 posts Likes: 4 Joined Sep 2009 Location: South African living in Indonesia More info | Good editing on the first image. Most people tend to want to do too much and end up ruining everything, but what you have done here is just spot on. The most important piece of gear you own, resides in your head and its called your brain.
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DunnoWhen Goldmember  1,748 posts Likes: 16 Joined Mar 2006 Location: South Wales More info | In respect of the first image, the warmer colour is better however, the model's skin colour and the background colour are close enough that the model is starting to merge with the background. My wisdom is learned from the experience of others.
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin  44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | I like the edits. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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Mr.Kenmuir Senior Member  316 posts Joined Feb 2011 Location: Vancouver B.C. More info | Dec 01, 2012 16:23 | #7 the warmer tone makes them all stand out better, hehe sorry I had to throw this in, but in the second set of images it seems you made the subject taller Vancouver B.C. Family Based Photographer | Flickr
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ventureon Member 173 posts Joined Apr 2012 Location: USA More info | Dec 01, 2012 16:37 | #8  Permanent bangreat edits. i would definitely soften the clarity and shadows on her baggy eyes though. www.facebook.com/ventureonphoto
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Dec 01, 2012 16:57 | #9 Great raw conversions, Now finish it off in a pixel editor and remove the moles and blemishes. 500px Gallery
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Dec 01, 2012 17:44 | #10 Thanks everyone for the critique! DunnoWhen wrote in post #15312139  In respect of the first image, the warmer colour is better however, the model's skin colour and the background colour are close enough that the model is starting to merge with the background. Can you darken the background just a little thus allowing the model to "POP" out from the background? Notice the difference in contrast between the background and the model's hair? How does this look? I tried to make the background a little darker. Also lightened the bagginess under her eyes and tried to brighten her eyes as well.  SmokeySiFy wrote in post #15313418 Great raw conversions, Now finish it off in a pixel editor and remove the moles and blemishes. The texture in 3 looks good in spots, but not in others. I would just add it to the spots that look good. I'm a little confused. I did remove the blemishes in photoshop? I wont remove moles though, that's part of her body. Skye.
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop  More info | Dec 01, 2012 18:56 | #11 I think you have some pretty good pictures here and your edits improved them even more. Nice job and a lovely model. Dave
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maverick75 Cream of the Crop More info | Dec 01, 2012 19:01 | #12 Titus213 wrote in post #15313828 I think you have some pretty good pictures here and your edits improved them even more. Nice job and a lovely model. Couldn't have said it better myself! - Alex Corona Sony A7, Canon 7DM2/EOS M, Mamiya 645/67
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Dec 01, 2012 22:47 | #13 placidbabe wrote in post #15313565 Thanks everyone for the critique! I'm a little confused. I did remove the blemishes in photoshop? I wont remove moles though, that's part of her body. As far as the texture in 3, which parts look good and don't look good? To me, it all looks good which is why I did it  I REALLY like the texture on the white part of the back wall. What doesn't look good to me is the texture on the left side of the model over the bench. The texture on the brown slats on either side of the white wall and on the bench look more like noise to me than texture. Just my opinion. 500px Gallery
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Dec 01, 2012 23:26 | #14 I like the warmer edit on the first one better, but like the original on the 2nd one better. Website: Iowa Landscape Photography
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Bianchi Cream of the Crop  More info | Dec 02, 2012 01:22 | #15 Titus213 wrote in post #15313828 I think you have some pretty good pictures here and your edits improved them even more. Nice job and a lovely model. ^^^+ 1
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