dmilwain wrote:
I like the angle of view of the first one
the second - not sure about the blown out area in the top right the cluter on the floor is VERY interesting maybe a closer shot, and the third seem like it could do with a bit more dark values [more contrast]
I love this kind of photography though - can't wait to get into some of it
-david
Thanks David having so close look. You noticed the same problem areas bothering me too. In the 2nd, burning of the blown out area did not bring satisfactory result so I left it as it is (but dodging helped to reveal the details; have to sneak in to the building again and see if I can do more with that subject
). In third pic, the contrast are not as strong as in the first two. There I tried to save the details of the different surfaces, but that is only an excuse for not making it more stiking - you can have both the details and good contrast at the same time.
- olli