Does this work? Just trying some things.
Dec 08, 2012 12:07 | #1 Does this work? Just trying some things. Um... Hi
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Dec 08, 2012 12:50 | #2 i like the processing, the arm protruding into her isn't great, but not much you could do with it
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cstewart Goldmember More info | Dec 08, 2012 15:40 | #3 No, sorry. If you are going to isolate a player like this, they need to be only thing in frame. Protrudung elbow kills it. I'd also prefer to see all or more of her face. Not too ken on the framing treatment either, but if you dress it up with a name/number/ team name etc., it could work well. Please Check Out My Work at:
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Dec 08, 2012 16:40 | #4 cstewart wrote in post #15342429 No, sorry. If you are going to isolate a player like this, they need to be only thing in frame. Protrudung elbow kills it. I'd also prefer to see all or more of her face. Not too ken on the framing treatment either, but if you dress it up with a name/number/ team name etc., it could work well. Totally agree. If you're going for isolation, isolate them. They CAN be framed though IMO and it still works, like the second photo. There's an elbow, like yours, but his face is not blocked by the ball or his own arm. Try shooting from the other side. If you shoot a right-handed shooter from their right side, arm is in the way most of the time.
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burnet44 Cream of the Crop More info | Dec 09, 2012 00:38 | #5 agree Canon 1DIV, Canon 1DII, 7D2 Canon gripped, 70-200 2.8 ISM II, Canon 50 1.8, Sigma 17-50 2.8, Canon 300 2.8, Canon 550 EX flash
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Dec 09, 2012 08:18 | #6 Thanks for the comments. I guess I actually prefer her peering over the ball, just my preference, I have various isolation shots, but I always feel it looks like just someone standing there. I could get those while they are warming up. I feel this at least gives the appearance it is during a game. But I do understand what you are saying. Um... Hi
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arich Senior Member 401 posts Joined Dec 2011 More info | Dec 11, 2012 09:30 | #7 Not a fan of the selective color processing at all, especially since some of her is in color and some isn't. Can't see her face, elbow cutting in, weird frame around the photo
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NewEnglandPhotographer Goldmember 2,343 posts Likes: 5 Joined Feb 2011 More info | Dec 11, 2012 19:26 | #8 really not a fan of the processing in any way. Canon 7D | 70-200mm f2.8is II L | 24-70mm f2.8 L | 50mm f1.8 | 28mm f1.8 | Canon 1.4x TC II | 580EX II
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