I like it much better than the first, the colours are great, and there's no big block of flat grey stone drawing my attention. But now its missing the very interesting rocks that are low in the water on the right, and the tops of the stones in the lower and side of the frame make it look a bit messy.
However, I believe I didn't express myself very well in my first reply. So I have done a very poor diagram showing what I meant (this is unrelated to your 2nd photo, I'm just re-reading my first post and clarifying):
(the red circle indicates the main subject/foreground interest, the arrow is roughly the direction the camera is meant to be pointing, and the weird leggy thing with a box is supposed to be a camera on a tripod)