Are we going to accept critiques?
windpig Chopped liver More info | Dec 22, 2012 12:06 | #61 Are we going to accept critiques? Would you like to buy a vowel?
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doidinho Goldmember 3,352 posts Likes: 23 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Kenmore, Washington More info | Dec 22, 2012 12:47 | #62 windpig wrote in post #15396862 Are we going to accept critiques? My vote would be yes considering that there is very little detail being provided with most of the images so so far. Robert McCadden
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dmward Cream of the Crop More info | Dec 22, 2012 12:58 | #63 doidinho wrote in post #15396952 My vote would be yes considering that there is very little detail being provided with most of the images so so far. Constructive of course. I agree. I'm always interested in hearing how other photographers think I can improve my images or techniques. David | Sharing my Insights, Knowledge & Experience
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windpig Chopped liver More info | Dec 22, 2012 13:37 | #64 Well, how about we give it a while and let those that have posted chime in in that regard and then those that agree get constructive criticism and/or observations on their posted image/images. Those that want the critic should also take the time to critic those of others. Would you like to buy a vowel?
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Dec 22, 2012 13:38 | #65 What do you guys think of the balance of this photo? Too much flash? Trisha and Mark-82L There is nothing worse than a brilliant image of a fuzzy concept. - Ansel Adams
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RandyMN Goldmember 3,131 posts Likes: 2 Joined Aug 2005 More info | Dec 22, 2012 13:41 | #66 Her face has some shadows that make it appear to be too much flash, but the rest looks balanced with sunlight.
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doidinho Goldmember 3,352 posts Likes: 23 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Kenmore, Washington More info | Dec 22, 2012 14:00 | #67 I don't think there is too much flash in the image at all. It does not fit into what I interpreted the theme of the tread to be, but it's still balanced IMO. whoty wrote in post #15397045 What do you guys think of the balance of this photo? Too much flash? 60in umbrella cam left ![]() Trisha and Mark-82L Robert McCadden
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dmward Cream of the Crop More info | Dec 22, 2012 14:03 | #68 whoty wrote in post #15397045 What do you guys think of the balance of this photo? Too much flash? 60in umbrella cam left Maybe just a touch. What makes it problematic is that it appears that her forehead is being lit by the sun. Without a lot of fill her face has the potential to go dark relative to the forehead. David | Sharing my Insights, Knowledge & Experience
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windpig Chopped liver More info | Dec 22, 2012 14:08 | #69 Hmmm, interesting comments by Robert 'cause to me it has a flash look to it. It could be that the exposure of his wrist/hand just seem out of balance with with the rest of the two subjects and distinct on axis flash look to me. I'd like to see the image without sharpening and web compression. Would you like to buy a vowel?
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doidinho Goldmember 3,352 posts Likes: 23 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Kenmore, Washington More info | Dec 22, 2012 14:22 | #70 windpig wrote in post #15397131 Hmmm, interesting comments by Robert 'cause to me it has a flash look to it. It could be that the exposure of his wrist/hand just seem out of balance with with the rest of the two subjects and distinct on axis flash look to me. I'd like to see the image without sharpening and web compression. I think we're on the same page. The sun is more of an accent light in the image and the key is the umbrella. Take away the umbrella and there would be relatively little light on the subjects. I think this is in line with your opinion as well? Robert McCadden
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Dec 22, 2012 14:24 | #71 Original SOOC converted to JPG a resized for web. Image hosted by forum (629260) © whoty [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. There is nothing worse than a brilliant image of a fuzzy concept. - Ansel Adams
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rodizzle Senior Member 472 posts Likes: 2 Joined Sep 2011 More info | Dec 22, 2012 15:29 | #72 PeyDay17 wrote in post #15396533 I've quoted it before and I'll quote it again... Amazing balance. This is what I have in mind when I think of balance ambient/flash. Thank you so much, flash/portrait photography in general is something I am still learning so I appreciate the compliments! MY FLICKR
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bobbyz Cream of the Crop 20,506 posts Likes: 3479 Joined Nov 2007 Location: Bay Area, CA More info | Dec 22, 2012 15:40 | #73 How is this one, one of my first shoots with flash. Sun was coming through trees behind her left. 550ex in small softbox on camera left. Park wasn't that good back ground wise but had to make up with what was available. Fuji XT-1, 18-55mm
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windpig Chopped liver More info | Dec 22, 2012 15:46 | #74 Okay guys, I'm an anal nitpicker and all this is subjective we can all agree. The unsharpend image looks better without the halos, but with the sun involved, even though it's a highlight, I think it needs a slightly higher ratio, pull the flash power down by 1/3. It's a real nice image, great connection between the two, a winner any day. My attention just gets drawn to the area of the two hands. Anyway I wanted to see if I could imitate a lover ratio in curves for the heck of it. It leaves then to underexposed. Image hosted by forum (629276) © windpig [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Image hosted by forum (629277) © windpig [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Would you like to buy a vowel?
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windpig Chopped liver More info | Dec 22, 2012 15:49 | #75 Bobby, I think you've simply got an innate ability to put this concept of balanced ambient/flash together.
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