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Jan 05, 2006 14:53 | #1

I let the model to feel comfortable as much as possible. Just like she is home (actually it is her home ). I tried to make it simple to yield out the feeling of how the model and the photographer communicate ... at the right moment I took the shot. I believe this picture capture that moment very well, as I still remember that feeling and the atmosphere.

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Jan 05, 2006 15:12 | #2

I like this but would prefer it in colour. Pretty girl.
Maybe a tad too dark though

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Jan 05, 2006 15:20 as a reply to @ Desertraptor's post | #3

Nice quiet moment. I would like to see some separation between her hair and the dark background if possible.

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Jan 05, 2006 16:32 as a reply to @ KaplanMultimedia's post | #4

I actually like the shot just the way it is. If you were to lighten up the background maybe a TINY bit but thats all. I like the blending, it helps focus your attention on her and her face. It keeps your eyes on her and I like the effect. I like the oldish feel to it .. I'm a fan!

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Jan 05, 2006 16:49 as a reply to @ KaplanMultimedia's post | #5

KaplanMultimedia wrote:
Nice quiet moment. I would like to see some separation between her hair and the dark background if possible.

I agree with Joel. Hair blends in too much with the background. I like the B&W and the pose though.

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Jan 05, 2006 17:58 | #6

Nice image and nice conversion but I agree with not enough separation. Additionally I find all the black space on the right distracting. I keep trying to find something in it and that draws me away from your very pretty model.

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Jan 05, 2006 18:54 | #7

As request, here is the colour version and re-editing version. I also improved the brightness between hair and the background to give more details on both of pictures too. Hope you like them better.

Thank you for your comment. It is appreciated.

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Jan 05, 2006 20:26 | #8

That looks alot better(b&w) but seems to be a little to bright on her cheek and the back of her arm.

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Jan 06, 2006 00:40 | #9

I like the pose but it is a little dark. The last b/w one is better but I don't understand your white streaks!!! Maybe sepia would give an older feel to it.

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Jan 06, 2006 02:46 | #10

Nice shot... =)

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