Outdoor with Elizabeth (Friendship Heights)

Elizabeth is an aspiring model from MM - A quick mini outdoor shoot with her.

Suggestions and Feedback is very welcome and appreciated.

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I think you over cooked her face a tad in pp.

leeport wrote in post #15431357
I think you over cooked her face a tad in pp.

Agreed, maybe just a tad, but otherwise these look great. Beautiful model with a good feel for things. I like the mood and settings also.

Thanks - I will rework on facial skin....

wow.. what a charmer!

You have some really really nice work on your website. Id do more of what you have on there and a lot less of what you have on these shots. They look like they were taken by different photographers! Granted, most of yuor site work is studio shots. These images look to have a lot more processing than your portfolio. Some of your wedding shots are stunning, both compositionally and technically. Are you trying new processing here?

She has a great look but in my opinion comes across as trying too hard. The expressions and body positions look kind of forced. For me, the second image is the most successful.

Great series, fantastic model. Interesting composition in all shots. I like most #2.

Beautiful shots

nice model

Sensational work - well done

really nice

Thank you everyone for your encouragement.

I agree that her skin does look a bit overcooked - she had a lot of acne / pimples and I tried to cover them to the best of my ability without overprocessing.... will try to work on these again.

Great shots

I like 1 and 5 best.. especially her expression and pose in 5

Nice work