looks good, a little on the cool side I'd warm it up a bit
a few tips i picked up i'd like to share for PPing people -
warmer is better, adjust your WB. you did a good job on the skin smoothing, what i have found is when doing females using the skin smooth brush, depending on the age of the female dont pull the clarity down so far, the older the people are, you want to allow some skin texture to show through.
males especially benefit from skin smoothing, though not as strong for women
spot edit skin blemishes, even the littlest ones, it makes a huge difference.
when your lighting isnt great, dodge the eye areas as much as you can.
use iris enhance to make eyes pop.
i cant tell if you used teeth whitening or if its just a product of the WB correction you did. but alway use it.
the goal inst to make people look face its to make them look good. good start.
add sharpening and mask almost the whole image to sharpen only the edge (in windows, hold ALT when you drag the slider to more easily see the adjustment being made)
avoid noise removal unless you absolutely need to, it really softens an image.