Eszter in Hotel Room CC welcome.

So, my friend asked me the other day to take some pictures of her...
I took the chance and asked one of our local Hotels, if we can shoot in one of theri rooms.

Here are some pictures, Critique, Opinions, Suggestions are welcome:

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Good series.. like the #2 and #4 the best... on my monitor it looks like the focus in #1 is on her waist/belt

On the first photo, I like the pose, but the face is very slightly out of focus. I'm a bit indifferent about the second. As for the third I like the way she is posed again, but the tilt of the camera is a bit distracting to me. For the fourth her hair gets a bit lost in the background and the line across her chest looks a bit uncomfortable. Other than those minor things I think they're pretty good, very nice looking model you've got.

Yupp, for Picture #1, now I see, I uploaded the wrong one... (There is another with her eyes in focus)

Corrected the problem now...

Any more?

Superb

Um, what are those rabbits doing?

Kronie wrote in post #15491905
Um, what are those rabbits doing?

Well... You know, what rabbits do usually