Newbie here and eager to learn off camera flash

Asking for suggestion, critics, tips....
I bought a basic off camera flash kit 2 lightstand,2 trough? white umbrella and savage super black paper 1 yn560-II and 430ex II using my 7D to trigger the slaves. We have a hometheater 13x25 that I now use part time small home studio for my family and friends, I am eager to learn for my family and friends and definitely not for the money (for now ) I love photography I started this hobby Aug/2010 started taking pics of birds, landscapes so tonight I took pics of my daughter with my new setup. I placed the flash from her left and right side pointed to her...please help how to improve...this pics are out from my camera without any pp. Thanks and please bear with the pics... This is my first try of this studio/off camera flash photography. THANKS

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I like #2! The lights are pretty hot in a few of them, and there's a lot of WB variation. Looking good for a first try.

2,4,5 look awesome Peter
I agree with ftwo, what WB is your cam set too?

ftwo wrote in post #15505951
I like #2! The lights are pretty hot in a few of them, and there's a lot of WB variation. Looking good for a first try.

DigitalTuned wrote in post #15507278
2,4,5 look awesome Peter
I agree with ftwo, what WB is your cam set too?

I appreciate ftwo and Digitaltuned very much.....after more than 300 members looked at this I thought nobody cares.

Anyway Digital my WB is in Auto.

Thanks.

ftwo wrote in post #15505951
I like #2! The lights are pretty hot in a few of them, and there's a lot of WB variation. Looking good for a first try.

Thank you.

Peter2516 wrote in post #15512229
I appreciate ftwo and Digitaltuned very much.....after more than 300 members looked at this I thought nobody cares.

Anyway Digital my WB is in Auto.

Thanks.

Set to flash and try so your white balance is consistent.

DigitalTuned wrote in post #15512255
Set to flash and try so your white balance is consistent.

Thanks I will try that.