OP, I think you did a great job. So much of PP is personal taste. The only thing that caught my eye was what appears to be purple fringing along her tiara (or is that just a pink tiara?), and there is maybe this strange painterly quality to the bokeh. Was that straight out of camera or did you apply some sort of layer adjustment?
As for even skin tone color, I typically use a Hue/Saturation layer and will adjust the tones manually, but that's only if something is really distracting. Or if there isn't a lot of detail in the skin itself that I need to be worried about, I'll clone from an area where I like the skin tone and use a low opacity clone stamp.
Of all the PP you did, I actually think your skin tones are strongest element of the photograph. Maybe a tad overly bright, but again, that is a personal style thing sometimes. I'm still just a newb, but I think you did a great job.