Approve the Cookies
This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and our Privacy Policy.
OK
Index  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear  •   • Reviews
Guest
New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear  •   • Reviews
Register to forums    Log in

 
FORUMS Photography Talk by Genre Critique Corner 
Thread started 31 Jan 2013 (Thursday) 16:33
Search threadPrev/next
sponsored links
(this ad will go away when you log in as a registered member)

Critique pleasse

 
ekfaysal
Senior Member
Avatar
418 posts
Gallery: 1 photo
Likes: 28
Joined Jun 2007
     
Jan 31, 2013 16:33 |  #1

Critique these photos please.
the composition, and the Post processing work
1.

PHOTOBUCKET EMBEDDING IS DISABLED BY THIS MEMBER.
Photobucket sends ads instead of embedding photos from their free galleries.
Click the link (if available) below to see the image in a gallery page.

http://i192.photobucke​t.com …/IMG_2906_zps3b​5966f3.jpg (external link)


2.
PHOTOBUCKET EMBEDDING IS DISABLED BY THIS MEMBER.
Photobucket sends ads instead of embedding photos from their free galleries.
Click the link (if available) below to see the image in a gallery page.

http://i192.photobucke​t.com …MG_2902_1_zpscd​53a767.jpg (external link)

My INSTAGRAM (external link)

Facebook page (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links
(this ad will go away when you log in as a registered member)
Sirrith
Cream of the Crop
10,545 posts
Gallery: 50 photos
Best ofs: 1
Likes: 36
Joined Nov 2010
Location: Hong Kong
     
Jan 31, 2013 22:49 |  #2

#1, did you intend the tower thing behind the car to be part of the photo? It seems a bit carelessly placed what with being partly hidden by the car. If you'd moved to the left so as to have both the car and the structure isolated, it would have been a stronger composition IMO.

#2, the car is facing the wrong way. It should be facing "into" the frame, not out.

#both, the PP looks strange to me. You have odd bits that are brighter, like halos, but not just around edges. The reflections on the car seem "smudged" in places (especially in #2 on the driver's door and the front bumper). The car doesn't have enough space under its front wheel in both shots and not enough space on the right in #1. The location is not the most glamorous and looks a bit cluttered (background) with random poles and houses sticking out of the hills.


-Tom
Flickr (external link)
F-Stop Guru review | RRS BH-40 review

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
jeremytf
Member
212 posts
Likes: 1
Joined Apr 2010
     
Jan 31, 2013 23:06 as a reply to  @ Sirrith's post |  #3

I agree with above... #1 has too much weight on the right and then empty void on the left. Step to the left and turn to get the water tank out of the center. #2 the car is ready to drive right out of the frame.
Pp doesn't look bad to me but I am on my phone so I can't see the detail...


Gear, Feedback

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
paul-t
Goldmember
1,871 posts
Joined Oct 2007
Location: The deep south, that's the deep south of England.
     
Feb 01, 2013 00:36 |  #4

Have to agree the pp looks a little odd, halo's/colours. I don't mind the water tank in the shot, but 1st shot there is a lot of clutter in the background. I would have moved to the right a little and shot from a much lower angle. 2nd shot front of the car is far to close to the r/h/s of thr frame. Again the background is to cluttered, shot from a lower angle loosing the buildings.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
ekfaysal
THREAD ­ STARTER
Senior Member
Avatar
418 posts
Gallery: 1 photo
Likes: 28
Joined Jun 2007
     
Feb 01, 2013 06:17 |  #5

thanks guys.
your comments really helpd me


My INSTAGRAM (external link)

Facebook page (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
PhotosGuy
Moderator
Avatar
75,866 posts
Gallery: 8 photos
Likes: 2516
Joined Feb 2004
Location: Middle of Michigan
     
Feb 01, 2013 10:45 |  #6

I agree with the above. Good start here. Don't forget that the little things are important, too.
In #2, you have the halo around the water tank, the wheel is turned the wrong way, & I'd have picked up the stick under the bumper.
OTOH, the highlights in #1 are very nice, which is what most people here get wrong, so you're on the right track. I'd have tried one with the parking lights on, too.
It doesn't look bad, but think about doing something with the License plate.


FrankC - 20D, RAW, Manual everything...
Classic Carz, Racing, Air Show, Flowers.
Find the light... A few Car Lighting Tips, and MOVE YOUR FEET!
Have you thought about making your own book? // Need an exposure crutch?
New Image Size Limits: Image must not exceed 1600 pixels on any side.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
scriveyn
Goldmember
Avatar
1,511 posts
Gallery: 556 photos
Best ofs: 3
Likes: 2987
Joined Jun 2011
Location: SW Germany
     
Feb 02, 2013 05:51 |  #7

Looks like that car was in an accident - or is that messed up bumper a result of some pp editing?


Frank, also known as jazzman
C&C welcome
Image Editing OK (for reposting in the same thread)

I Jazz

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
chrnat
Senior Member
Avatar
433 posts
Joined Dec 2005
Location: Abu Dhabi
     
Feb 03, 2013 07:16 |  #8

I see the car as a record shot only. I suspect that without the car the landscape might be more interesting


Canon 1DX & 5d
EF 70 - 200 2.8L USM, EF 85 - 1.2L USM
EF 16 - 35 2.8 L USM, EF 24 - 70 2.8 L USM
2 Espirit Gemini Bowen 500, 3 head courtenay 1000s, 600 EX-RT

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
skycolt
Senior Member
410 posts
Joined Apr 2012
     
Feb 03, 2013 21:43 |  #9

2 is better. the small tower in 1 is really distracting. for 2, I think you can leave more space on the right side instead of left


1D IV | converted 1000D | ever changing lenses
Flickr (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links
(this ad will go away when you log in as a registered member)

1,214 views & 0 likes for this thread
Critique pleasse
FORUMS Photography Talk by Genre Critique Corner 
AAA
x 1600
y 1600

Jump to forum...   •  Rules   •  Index   •  New posts   •  RTAT   •  'Best of'   •  Gallery   •  Gear   •  Reviews   •  Member list   •  Polls   •  Image rules   •  Search   •  Password reset

Not a member yet?
Register to forums
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!


COOKIES DISCLAIMER: This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and to our privacy policy.
Privacy policy and cookie usage info.


POWERED BY AMASS forum software 2.1forum software
version 2.1 /
code and design
by Pekka Saarinen ©
for photography-on-the.net

Latest registered member is KathKirk33
959 guests, 302 members online
Simultaneous users record so far is 15144, that happened on Nov 22, 2018

Photography-on-the.net Digital Photography Forums is the website for photographers and all who love great photos, camera and post processing techniques, gear talk, discussion and sharing. Professionals, hobbyists, newbies and those who don't even own a camera -- all are welcome regardless of skill, favourite brand, gear, gender or age. Registering and usage is free.