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Feb 11, 2013 00:26 | #1

Couple of quick shots of my wife from the other day. I like how they turned out. Trying to find out if the processing is too much. All comments welcome. Thanks
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Feb 11, 2013 00:30 | #2

Looks good but eyes don't look natural. She probably has naturally beautiful eyes, accentuate them not replace.

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Feb 11, 2013 00:38 | #3

If you could find a dark part in background bokeh then all would be fine.
I don't like that pinpoint spot flash over her pupils. Drives away the attention from beauty of her eyes.

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Feb 11, 2013 00:57 as a reply to @ samsen's post | #4

Thanks, toning down the eyes. But i agree on the pin point flash bugs the crap out of me. Use a dark spot of bokeh to clone the pupil or just the horrible catch light? Trying to catch your drift.

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Feb 11, 2013 02:01 | #5

skin not natural too. over softening i guess for my taste.

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