Guys.
Please critique it. how wud u compose it ? How's post procesing on it ? let me know please
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Feb 12, 2013 14:03 | #1 Guys. IMG_3725
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Feb 12, 2013 14:28 | #2 the first thing I noticed were those two little shrubs blocking the car logo. Also, not sure how I feel about the bottom dark area. We both have the same camera though =) 6D, 70D, Pancake lens, Nifty Fifty, Sigma 50 Art, Canon 135LL IS, YN560 III
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Feb 12, 2013 14:41 | #3 ready2go wrote in post #15602705 the first thing I noticed were those two little shrubs blocking the car logo. Also, not sure how I feel about the bottom dark area. We both have the same camera though =) But you are actually lens rich
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sapearl Cream of the Crop More info | Feb 12, 2013 14:45 | #4 I like the processing and exposure on this - nicely done. Your selection of flat, somewhat cloudy light gives a pleasing illumination to the car. As ready stated, those two bushes look really out of place, breaking up the nice lines of the vehicle. Perhaps moving more to the left will "shift" them away from the bumper. GEAR LIST
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Sven.P. Mostly Lurking 13 posts Joined Feb 2013 More info | I like the contrast between the brighter sky and the darker bottom part which gives the car a nice "framing". As already mentioned, the bushes in front of the car are distracting for me and I would also use a slightly flatter angle (i.e. higher camera position) so less of the rear of the car get covered by the ground.
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Crooks Member 32 posts Likes: 1 Joined May 2012 More info | Feb 12, 2013 15:46 | #6 Yeah, the two shrubs in front of the car were the first things I saw. Maybe you should've taken it from a different angle.
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Feb 13, 2013 02:20 | #7 i didnt have any place to move to recompose . so couldnt get rid of those shrubs
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samsen Cream of the Crop 7,468 posts Likes: 239 Joined Apr 2006 Location: LA More info | Feb 13, 2013 04:30 | #8 If you are asking just for the sake of processing, Not bad. Weak retaliates,
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alinajohn991 Hatchling 1 post Joined Feb 2013 More info | Feb 13, 2013 05:04 | #9 nice
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Madjackdog Senior Member 338 posts Likes: 1 Joined Mar 2012 Location: San Diego More info | Feb 21, 2013 23:32 | #10 Very nice exposure, and yeah, the masking plants mar the overall effect, and I'd also crop both the top and bottom. I can't say enough about the exposure, though, really excellent. Go back and try again, and bring your pruning shears along. Alan - 5DMKIII - 24-70 2.8 - 70-200 2.8 - 50 1.2 - 100 Macro 2.8 - 100-400 4.5/5.6
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StaticMedia Senior Member 875 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2011 More info | Feb 22, 2013 19:35 | #11 What are we looking at here? Dirt...or Car??? or the bush in-between? The exposure or the processing? The color looks o.k. but thats about it. I dunno what im looking at here.
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