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Mar 01, 2013 17:40 |  #1

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I spotted it so I had to take the shot

critiques are welcomed :)

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Mar 01, 2013 17:41 |  #2

Very nice! Love the colors!


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Mar 01, 2013 17:51 |  #3

vschapman wrote in post #15666291 (external link)
Very nice! Love the colors!

Thank you ! :)


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Mar 02, 2013 09:42 |  #4

I think this needs something to show the viewer it is the "first flower". Perhaps if you had taken a few steps back. Also looks a bit under exposed. I like the concept though!


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Mar 03, 2013 21:14 |  #5

Nice colors and composition....I would have removed the stem or whatever it was that was casting a straight line shadow across the flower pedals though.


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Mar 06, 2013 01:27 |  #6

I like it. what kind of flower was it


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Mar 06, 2013 04:33 as a reply to  @ Ilovetheleafs's post |  #7

I spotted it so I had to take the shot

I understand that but...that doesn't mean you can't photogenically improve on the surroundings by preening out things that would draw your eye away from the flower.
Work the shot, change your perspective, zoom in closer... ;)


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Mar 06, 2013 07:52 |  #8

Agree that this also needs an exposure boost.


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