second post

canon 650d with tamron 70-300

Well this is an improvement over your first post. This is unfortunately not that good - it's out of focus and too warm of a skin tone for my taste. What were the details of this shot? ISO, f-stop, shutter speed and focal length. With that information I can help you much more.

The framing isn't bad, but one of the biggest issues other than focus is her forehead. The photo really accentuates her forehead and my guess is it makes it look larger than it is due to the pose. It is shot straight on which is usually not so flattering for women.

Things that could help the forehead part would be a different hairstyle, turning the body and tilting the head some, or even cropping some of it off - which can be done effectively.

But anyway if you can provide the shot details I can assist more.

Stop deleting the pictures you post. You'll never learn anything that way.

CoPhotoGuy wrote in post #15678810
Stop deleting the pictures you post. You'll never learn anything that way.

Agree with this, this is the second thread I've gone to of yours that you deleted the picture..

ugghhh I thought the first one was just a mistake...why post and delete?

CoPhotoGuy wrote in post #15678810
Stop deleting the pictures you post. You'll never learn anything that way.

Hate it when people delete, why post in the first place?

jc, one would usually leave the original posted image up and then post edits further down in the thread, allowing for comparison with the original posted image. If you would like to delete (for whatever reason) after the thread has run its course and comments cease then that is certainly your option. Perhaps you were not aware of this. Welcome to the forum. Looking forward to future posts.

Best Regards,
Mark