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Mar 14, 2013 15:33 |  #1

I got this shot on a dreary snowy day earlier this month. I cropped it pretty close... so I could back off the swans to show more... space. Comments and Critique of this cropping?

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Mar 14, 2013 16:01 |  #2

That is the same issue I had last weekend when I was shooting local swans! What would happen if you just cropped it down and used one swan instead of both? For me, there is too much 'dead' space between the two birds to make it overly compelling. Just my opinion though.


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Mar 14, 2013 16:09 as a reply to  @ Fire0725's post |  #3

It might be kind of cool if you cropped it to a long, narrow shot. So you have both swans yet the image would not have much height. Images like this are unique and pretty eye catching.


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Mar 14, 2013 16:17 |  #4

I agree with both comments above....you could cheat a bit however...cropped to 16 x 9 and darkened bottom:

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Mar 14, 2013 16:20 as a reply to  @ Spike44's post |  #5

Try a 16x9 crop...


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Mar 14, 2013 17:09 |  #6

Spike44 wrote in post #15715528 (external link)
I agree with both comments above....you could cheat a bit however...cropped to 16 x 9 and darkened bottom:

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Mar 15, 2013 04:22 |  #7

Darkening thing definitely works. Lose the black border though.


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Mar 15, 2013 07:44 |  #8

I like Spike44's crop, but I don't like the obvious cloning. Just my $.02...


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Mar 15, 2013 08:55 |  #9

KirkS518 wrote in post #15717482 (external link)
I like Spike44's crop, but I don't like the obvious cloning. Just my $.02...

I agree Kirk, it is a bit extreme and obvious - my intention was more to show OP how much better it would have been to eliminate the dead space with another element (another swan).




  
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