Family shoot at the park

These are partially edited, still need final crop and background cleanup. Cc welcome.

Your stuff is blocked.

Thanks Shane. Will fix that.

I like the ones on the log and by the lake better than the ones on the bridge. Subjects seem underexposed versus the background on the bridge shots.

Watermark is annoying, makes it difficult to critique the images.

I like 4,6 & 7

I really like the composition of the bridge shots, but would agree that the subjects seem a touch underexposed. Maybe try a reflector or fill flash next time. Looks like a very nice family... good series

did some curves adjustment, hopefully fixed the exposure on the girls

I especially love # 4 and 5. To have those memories with family is priceless!

The bridge shots were nice, but the background lighting is too harsh, in my opinion. With all of them, I would have tried to find a less distracting/busy background. Also, try getting lower with the kids. The bridge shot with their back turned to you turned out alot better because you were on their level. Just a suggestion. Not a bad shoot though.

Did you use flash? The blown out sky in #1 is especially distracting.

When shooting a bridge shot like the one above, would you guys usually center the shot more?

beautiful pictures and family.

Need to look critically at focus, exposure and balancing with ambient. Looks like no flash in any of the images. Did you use AI Servo for the girls walking across the bridge? Looks OOF.