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Apr 05, 2013 18:22 |  #16

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crop tight , always look to get faces with action and possible the opponent not blocking the team your shootings face

Thank you 12Rock. Here is one that follows i took just a while ago....




  
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Apr 05, 2013 18:23 as a reply to  @ post 15795159 |  #17

Here is one with all of your suggestions...This was at the ground level, tighter crop ...just taken a while ago.

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Apr 05, 2013 19:52 |  #18

Those are great improvements. Very nice work. Watch your leveling in post (window in the center of the uncropped image should be vertical, then you crop).

You should experiment a bit with tighter framing for some of your shots. There's a bit of story telling the way you have them framed, but it's good to have some shots of just one player with the ball -- and I've moved about 75% this direction. Not saying you want to give up the wider stuff completely, but give it a run. Copy a couple and crop them tighter for comparison to see what you think.


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Apr 05, 2013 21:25 |  #19

waterrockets wrote in post #15795478 (external link)
Those are great improvements. Very nice work. Watch your leveling in post (window in the center of the uncropped image should be vertical, then you crop).

You should experiment a bit with tighter framing for some of your shots. There's a bit of story telling the way you have them framed, but it's good to have some shots of just one player with the ball -- and I've moved about 75% this direction. Not saying you want to give up the wider stuff completely, but give it a run. Copy a couple and crop them tighter for comparison to see what you think.

Thanks Waterrockets for your kind words. Never would have noticed the windows in the background are tilted. That's a very professional observation. I will be more aware while cropping here on....I will also try the single person closer shots and experiment in the coming days..Appreciate it.




  
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