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Apr 05, 2013 22:55 |  #1

Model bailed for my Otherwise Normal shoot, so I ended up having some free time to shoot these this morning.

Model: Alyssa Marie Papaleo

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Apr 06, 2013 18:37 |  #2

Alternate Edit (and my personal favorite from the shoot):

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Any comments would be appreciated. =)


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Apr 09, 2013 06:22 |  #4

I like the concept and prefer the 2nd 2 shots better than the first 2 .. could be my monitor but the shots appear soft... or was that intended? In my opinion the mirror image is fuzzy brown (suspect on purpose coverup of the bathroom stall doors?) on the left and sharp grey tile on the right.. looks a little odd to me.. since the room appears to have all browns on the wall ..


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Apr 09, 2013 11:13 |  #5

i cant tell if its intentionally OOF or not, not big on the shadow under the face in 3.


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Apr 09, 2013 14:25 |  #6

huntnthyme1 wrote in post #15807011 (external link)
I like the concept and prefer the 2nd 2 shots better than the first 2 .. could be my monitor but the shots appear soft... or was that intended? In my opinion the mirror image is fuzzy brown (suspect on purpose coverup of the bathroom stall doors?) on the left and sharp grey tile on the right.. looks a little odd to me.. since the room appears to have all browns on the wall ..

The focus is on the reflection in the mirror, so the softness in the foreground is on purpose (Im sure that the facebook quality doesnt exactly help this case either). There is no cover up in the shot, the tile starts where you see it and the rest of the wall is just a tan/light brown color, there are no shower doors. Just past the half wall is a toilet, then the tub and shower, which just has a curtain. There is a window just behind the toilet, that brought in a lot of light though, which is probably the shadow that youre seeing, that looks like a bad cloneout...maybe I should clone that out lol. Thanks for your comments =)


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