Guitartists wrote in post #15803412
I like the vibe of #1, not a fan really of #2, #3 calendar/pin-up-ish ... but the top half of pic is best ...she looks relaxed, #4..ow, how did she get her foot pointed so far over ...looks painful, and yeah Qbx said...compressed, but her smile is so killer you could just crop that image down a lot and you'd still have a cute pic, and the last one...a very lovely lady

Seems to me.... she's very photogenic... get those poses down and you'll have some knockout images!
Thanks for the feedback! Yea her pose in #3 she thought looked weird but she liked her placement of hands, smile, and overall composition of shot so much that I kept it. As for #2, what aren't you a fan of? The location? The lighting? The pose? It's funny cause we put these shots on Instagram and most people liked that shot the best lol. Thought it was hot. But then again, these are people that aren't as knowledgeable about the finer points of photography as you guys are, so I wouldn't expect the same feedback 
losangelino wrote in post #15803430
Nice set. #3 is blurry from camera shake maybe.
Yes a little blur. I was trying to do so many things at once. Set up the off camera speedlight, make sure it would actually flash (for some reason my 430 EX II wont flash sometimes when used as a slave, not sure if this is a known problem or not). I'm also trying to get the composition and pose right, the right settings on my camera, good focus. 