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Apr 13, 2013 18:06 |  #1

Please any suggestions accepted...Critique...​black and white candid shot.....thanks jim
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Apr 13, 2013 19:36 |  #2

The picture of the girl with the hat seems underexposed. A gradient in lightroom would fix that. Also this picture would look better sharper and with higher contrast. my 2 cents.


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Apr 14, 2013 12:45 |  #3

It's a nice shot. But you had the brightest light on the back of her head. So her face is in shadow. One can barely make out her features. Think about the direction and quality of light in the future.


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Apr 14, 2013 21:29 |  #4

joedlh wrote in post #15826694 (external link)
It's a nice shot. But you had the brightest light on the back of her head. So her face is in shadow. One can barely make out her features. Think about the direction and quality of light in the future.

How do you do that when you are taking candid shots? jim


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Apr 15, 2013 05:13 |  #5

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Apr 15, 2013 08:19 as a reply to  @ lmans's post |  #6

Position yourself in the right spot. Wait for the moment. And yes, Sometimes the moment never comes.


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