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by DeviAngelMKD, on FlickrCan you please give me critique
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Apr 13, 2013 19:33 | #1 domastaro by DeviAngelMKD, on FlickrCan you please give me critique ? tyCanon 6D | Canon 85mm f/1.8 USM | Canon 50mm f/1.4 USM |
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stillinamerica Goldmember 1,275 posts Joined Oct 2009 Location: Alabama More info | Apr 13, 2013 21:20 | #2 It lacks context for me. The pipe in the middle doesn't look great. Try different angles [CENTER]My Facebook
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Apr 13, 2013 21:46 | #3 Interesting subject matter here. I think HDR would work well - maybe get down to floor level and shoot up. -- Image Editing OK --
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Apr 14, 2013 09:17 | #4 Thank you Canon 6D | Canon 85mm f/1.8 USM | Canon 50mm f/1.4 USM |
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sandytrouble Member 104 posts Joined Feb 2011 More info | Apr 14, 2013 10:14 | #5 The overexposed windows in the background are distracting also 7D [EFS 17-55, EF 50 1.4, 70-200 IS II]
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DanKearley Senior Member 426 posts Likes: 32 Joined Aug 2012 More info | Apr 14, 2013 10:39 | #6 Cloning out the wires might help too. Even if its dishonest.
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin  44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Cool space. If you could re visit at a less sunladen time, it could be sweet. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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Apr 14, 2013 21:37 | #8 I agree, this would be worth a revisit. Like QBX I would like to see a lower shot (perhaps on your stomach) shooting up and closer, giving the stove and pipe a larger than life look. Also think a gritty B&W conversion would work well on this. Lots of possibilities here, good luck. 5D III / Canon 50mm 1.4 / Canon 50mm 1.8 / 17-40L / 135L / 85L 1.2 II / 70-200L 2.8 IS
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Guitartists Senior Member  900 posts Likes: 1 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Michigan More info | Apr 15, 2013 17:32 | #9 Maybe cropping it so the distracting bit on the left is gone ....leaving about 1/3 of that left window in the shot. "Photography has no rules. It is not a sport. It is the result which counts, no matter how it was achieved." ~ Bill Brandt
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Apr 17, 2013 02:43 | #10 I'd like to see wider take in more of the space, you teased at it well but not quiet wide enough for my liking Canon Rebel XS gripped, Canon 18 - 55mm, Sigma 18 - 200mm f3.5 - f6.3 DC OS HSM,Sigma 50mm f1.4 Olympus TG-810 Tough, LowePro Classified 160AW, Canon 430EX II Flash, Kata E-702
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