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Apr 26, 2013 16:30 |  #1

Still trying....C&C welcomed.

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Apr 26, 2013 17:52 as a reply to  @ post 15870742 |  #2

I agree, and that being the case, it tends to leave the photo flat. I like the composition alot. Play with some curves etc on the tones, see what you can come up with. She is adorable :)

Had a very quick stab at it.

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Apr 26, 2013 18:51 |  #3

Looks to be very sharp and well exposed. And an interesting smile. I think Flo has hit the processing pretty good though. Shadows on the face give it depth and character.


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Apr 26, 2013 19:05 |  #4

Thank you all.

Flo - I like your redo of the image. My pp skills annoy me, for lack of better description. Did you change highlights, midtones, and shadows individually on curves? I just toyed with the sliders under the Basic tab in LR (blacks, shadows, whites, etc.). I don't seem to have a good handle on manipulating curves so any advice on how to be better is greatly appreciated. :)


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Apr 26, 2013 23:23 |  #5

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Thank you all.

Flo - I like your redo of the image. My pp skills annoy me, for lack of better description. Did you change highlights, midtones, and shadows individually on curves? I just toyed with the sliders under the Basic tab in LR (blacks, shadows, whites, etc.). I don't seem to have a good handle on manipulating curves so any advice on how to be better is greatly appreciated. :)

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Apr 27, 2013 19:40 |  #6

Tried to add some more contrast ... and bring out the freckles more :D lost some of the detail in the shirt but hope you like it

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