Critique my shots!

Been dabbling in photography for a few years now and fairly recently started editing using Lightroom at work. I would like your thoughts on some of my shots I am rather fond of. I am just shooting with a T2i with the 55-250 lens that came in the kit. Any questions, insight, ideas I would love to hear!

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Here are my thoughts on some of your photos.
1. In #1, the car looks parked, but I suspect it is moving. Since some of your other pans are a good start, I’d suggest lowering the shutter speed to get some blur in the wheels that show movement.
2. On #2 and #4, I think the shot would look better if you gave the cars room to move. Frame the cars closer to the left and leave most of the open area in front of the cars.
3. #4 seems a little out of focus. You might increase the shutter speed a little and practice the pans more.
4. I like the angle in #5, but the pole in the back that looks like it’s growing out of the hood and the other things on the sides, distract from the shot. Since you’re using Lightroom, try using the adjustment brush and clone out at least the pole.
5. # 10 has the same issue with a pole growing out of the roof. Try cloning it out. You also might want to use the gradient filter on the sky to emphasize the clouds and darken the blues.
6. I would crop #11 to keep walls but get rid of the distracting sign and photographers. The wall on the right is a great leading line so keep as much as you can.

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Grand Dad wrote in post #15872548
Here are my thoughts on some of your photos.
1. In #1, the car looks parked, but I suspect it is moving. Since some of your other pans are a good start, I’d suggest lowering the shutter speed to get some blur in the wheels that show movement.
2. On #2 and #4, I think the shot would look better if you gave the cars room to move. Frame the cars closer to the left and leave most of the open area in front of the cars.
3. #4 seems a little out of focus. You might increase the shutter speed a little and practice the pans more.
4. I like the angle in #5, but the pole in the back that looks like it’s growing out of the hood and the other things on the sides, distract from the shot. Since you’re using Lightroom, try using the adjustment brush and clone out at least the pole.
5. # 10 has the same issue with a pole growing out of the roof. Try cloning it out. You also might want to use the gradient filter on the sky to emphasize the clouds and darken the blues.
6. I would crop #11 to keep walls but get rid of the distracting sign and photographers. The wall on the right is a great leading line so keep as much as you can.

Thanks I will take all that into account!