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Apr 28, 2013 17:47 |  #1

Cheap, needs some work :)

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Apr 28, 2013 19:37 |  #2

That shack out front ruins the grandeur and majesty of this beautiful home's side variety garden!


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Apr 28, 2013 20:04 |  #3

NBEast wrote in post #15876943 (external link)
That shack out front ruins the grandeur and majesty of is beautiful home's side variety garden!

UM?




  
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Apr 28, 2013 21:01 |  #4

I wish that it had a dead, fallen tree just to the right of it. :)


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Apr 28, 2013 21:03 |  #5

I see where you're trying to go with this but the dumpster(?) on the left detracts from the composition.


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Apr 28, 2013 21:58 as a reply to  @ sapearl's post |  #6

As with the trees you posted, this also is titled. Moving around to get the correct angle and perspective is easy enough? That could have eliminated the well.whatever it is altogether and focused on the house.


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Apr 28, 2013 22:54 |  #7

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UM?

Ummm, joke? Shack, dumpster, water tower, can't really tell.

Seriously though; I'd prefer a perspective that's not blocked.


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Apr 28, 2013 23:36 |  #8

I agree about that copper thing whatever it is.
I think it could benefit from some dramatic lighting! It needs some creepy shadows and such.




  
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Apr 29, 2013 00:15 |  #9

Not sure what it is (above ground septic tank?) in the foreground, but the shot would be better without it.....:lol:


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Apr 29, 2013 07:37 |  #10

Titus213 wrote in post #15877705 (external link)
Not sure what it is (above ground septic tank?) in the foreground, but the shot would be better without it.....:lol:

You've obviously never lived a farmer's life. The septic is buried - at least it's supposed to be. Since there's a ladder there I'd suppose it's a water tank converted cleverly into a swimming pool.:D
This is the kind of scene that an HDR for effect would add some positive creep to!


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Apr 29, 2013 08:48 as a reply to  @ Qbx's post |  #11

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Apr 29, 2013 11:27 |  #12

cpam.pix wrote in post #15877141 (external link)
I wish that it had a dead, fallen tree just to the right of it. :)

There was, see next version :)




  
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Apr 29, 2013 11:28 |  #13

Flo wrote in post #15877336 (external link)
As with the trees you posted, this also is titled. Moving around to get the correct angle and perspective is easy enough? That could have eliminated the well.whatever it is altogether and focused on the house.

Thanks, always do (move around) I just liked this angle but see the next that you might like better :)




  
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Apr 29, 2013 11:29 |  #14

Qbx wrote in post #15878349 (external link)
You've obviously never lived a farmer's life. The septic is buried - at least it's supposed to be. Since there's a ladder there I'd suppose it's a water tank converted cleverly into a swimming pool.:D
This is the kind of scene that an HDR for effect would add some positive creep to!

Please feel free to try your spin on it ;)




  
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Apr 29, 2013 12:14 |  #15

Actually your exposure is pretty good - HDR would add little to nothing. Tm - can you go back and create a different cropped composition, elimanting the tank? Once you get rid of that element you'll have more options.


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