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Apr 30, 2013 09:05 |  #1

This bird is near the sea and I'm really happy with the picture. If you look closely, the bird is walking away from the viewer. Thanks for your comments!

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Apr 30, 2013 09:18 |  #2

Focus is off - should be on gull's eye.


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Apr 30, 2013 09:20 |  #3

Consider your position on the telescope thing at the left. Are you trying to include it in the composition? Exclude it? You're kind of waffling between the two right now, as it's in the edge of the frame and cut off.


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Apr 30, 2013 09:23 |  #4

Sorry, but in the "Share" areas IMAGE POSTING RULES specifically state: "Do not use the forum as your image gallery, post only the best of the best and link to the rest."
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Apr 30, 2013 11:34 as a reply to  @ PhotosGuy's post |  #5

It is OOF, horizon is slanted, not enough contrast for me.Agree with the composition as well.


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Apr 30, 2013 13:09 |  #6

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looked like fun image to play with. what i did:
convert to black/white
sharpened
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leveled the horizon

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Apr 30, 2013 14:20 as a reply to  @ howzitboy's post |  #7

even in edit, you can see the focus is off.but seagulls are everywhere, lol.they can be re-photographed!


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Apr 30, 2013 14:44 |  #8

No saving this one. Sorry. The B&W conversion added some terrible CA to that thing on the left side of the frame and there's a halo around the bird. Trash bin.


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