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May 07, 2013 08:13 |  #1

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May 07, 2013 08:41 |  #2

Very nice framing/composition. Lighting, exposure, focus look good. Shame about the stray hair falling down on her face ....might want to desaturate the greens a bit.




  
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May 07, 2013 08:58 as a reply to  @ Spike44's post |  #3

I know, She's messy :lol:


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May 07, 2013 10:28 |  #4

It looks good to me. The only thing I'd change is to clone out the two bright buttons on her collar.


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May 07, 2013 10:29 |  #5

I like it. Print it & hang it on the wall.


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May 07, 2013 10:55 as a reply to  @ PhotosGuy's post |  #6

Another one of her.

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May 07, 2013 10:56 as a reply to  @ Frosticles's post |  #7

Just looking at it, it looks like she has her thumbs up her nose, She is actually trying to use a blade of grass as a reed.


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May 07, 2013 11:53 |  #8

I almost like this 2nd shot better because it shows more of her face/eyes ...only problem is she is bit too far to the left.....to much room on the right.
If you haven't used grass between the thumbs as an instrument, you probably would not get this - I do.




  
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May 07, 2013 14:08 |  #9

The first shot is the better of the two, in fact, it's outstanding. There isn't a darn thing wrong with it.


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May 07, 2013 14:10 |  #10

Beautiful picture. I would definitely frame this.




  
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May 07, 2013 15:35 as a reply to  @ katiedaddy's post |  #11

Number one, beautiful picture.


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May 07, 2013 16:58 as a reply to  @ A1original's post |  #12

Thank you all. Hugely appreciated. :)


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May 07, 2013 18:14 |  #13

I like the profile shot best with the crisp details


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May 07, 2013 19:24 |  #14

I like the posing of the first one better, but the facial lighting on the second.

On the first one, her face is darker than her hands, legs, buttons, and bright flowers on the right. Too much is competing for my attention. While I am not able to do it, I would lighten her face and darken her hand and legs. That would make the print stronger for me.

The pose is spot-on perfect. I like how you captured her alone in her thoughts with the flowers.

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May 07, 2013 23:40 |  #15

Print and Hang 1st shot.




  
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