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May 07, 2013 16:46 |  #1

Here's one I took of my fiance Stacey today in the local park. CC desired.

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May 07, 2013 22:08 |  #2

Alright, I let it get to 100 before I said something ;) Come on guys, I can take it :D


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May 07, 2013 22:31 |  #3

pretty scenery, but the pic is not compelling. She seems a bit unnatural standing in the elevated flower bed also. No real life to the photo...she is just standing there. Her face could use some fill light as well. Looks as if the ambient lighting was pretty nice. Would have been a nice day and setting for some portraits of her. Beautiful girl...help her with some ideas about posing, etc.


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May 07, 2013 22:35 |  #4

it's to busy.


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May 07, 2013 22:41 |  #5

Ok thanks guys. I have plenty of portraits of her from today. This one was to specifically try out the Brenizer method.


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May 08, 2013 08:40 |  #6

You are too far away from her for the Brenizer method to really work in this shot. I think the pathway right behind her would have been a much better candidate for a Brenizer shot.


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May 08, 2013 11:04 |  #7

Ok thanks checkgio!


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May 08, 2013 11:06 |  #8

More her, less stuff. The Brenizer effect doesnt show its full result when you are back far enough to include that much foreground.




  
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May 12, 2013 00:02 |  #9

shoot her in portrait next time


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May 12, 2013 11:02 |  #10

My eyes was drawn to the landscape and benches before actually seeing the model.


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May 12, 2013 11:40 |  #11

Yeah definitely lots of competing elements in this picture.


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May 12, 2013 12:42 |  #12

its crooked too :)

get the flagpole straight and the horizon level.


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