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daystar Senior Member  589 posts Likes: 520 Joined Aug 2008 Location: East Coast, US More info | May 10, 2013 20:59 | #1 Thank you. Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8
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May 10, 2013 23:15 | #2 Very nice. Only thing I would try to fix is the shadow behind him. It's not too bed, maybe dodge it just a little. ---------------
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daystar THREAD STARTER Senior Member 589 posts Likes: 520 Joined Aug 2008 Location: East Coast, US More info | May 10, 2013 23:24 | #3 Aha! Good call. I overlooked that. Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8
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May 11, 2013 00:00 | #4 Another thing is his pose. You captured him great, but just the pose seems strange. ---------------
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saea501 ... spilled over a little on the panties  More info | There are some dark areas that make his face look dirty. Especially his forehead and under his nose. Remember what the DorMouse said.....feed your head.
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daystar THREAD STARTER Senior Member 589 posts Likes: 520 Joined Aug 2008 Location: East Coast, US More info | May 11, 2013 07:14 | #6 saea501 wrote in post #15920774  There are some dark areas that make his face look dirty. Especially his forehead and under his nose. Cute little guy..... LOL. He was dirty! Long day after the beach and he also had a huge chocolate milk ring around his mouth that I had to try to clone out. Not the cleanest canvas to begin working with. Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8
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May 11, 2013 08:26 | #7 Nice capture and work on the face. I think I'd darken the white streak on the upper right and maybe even crop out most of it which would take his face out of the center of the frame. -- Image Editing OK --
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olafsosh I am a nice and fluffy dude  More info | May 11, 2013 10:24 | #8 As much as I can appreciate crisp sharp eyes, it often bothers me, that everything else from the face and head is left OOF. - Olafs Osh
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daystar THREAD STARTER Senior Member 589 posts Likes: 520 Joined Aug 2008 Location: East Coast, US More info | Thank you for your opinion. Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8
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revluke Senior Member 438 posts Likes: 4 Joined Oct 2012 Location: Minneapolis, MN More info | May 13, 2013 00:51 | #10 I love it, just bummed we cut off a bit of his head. See, I'm already saying we, cuz that pic takes me there with you. Nicely done! 5dIII | 70d | Rokinon 14 | 16-35 f4 IS | 40 2.8 | s50A | 70-200 2.8 IS II | 100 f2 | s120-300S | sigma 2x | 600EX-RT
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daystar THREAD STARTER Senior Member 589 posts Likes: 520 Joined Aug 2008 Location: East Coast, US More info | May 13, 2013 06:35 | #11 LOL that's one of the best comments I've ever received! Thank you! Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8
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suecassidy Goldmember  4,102 posts Likes: 37 Joined May 2007 Location: Huntington Beach California More info | May 14, 2013 01:07 | #12 I don't see cropping into the top of the head to be a problem as much as an artistic choice. I do that all the time on purpose. I love the high angle of the shot. When he looked up, it caused the sky to be reflected in his eyes, which makes them sparkle. I think the high angle works with his expression as well because it makes him look small and vulnerable and it IS the perspective by which you view him most of the time. In THIS shot, it totally works. If he were my little boy, I would absolutely want that framed and on a table top. terrific! Sue Cassidy
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rrblint Listen! .... do you smell something?  More info | May 14, 2013 01:25 | #13 I think that it is a very cute photo of a boy being a boy...Good job Whitney! Mark
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daystar THREAD STARTER Senior Member 589 posts Likes: 520 Joined Aug 2008 Location: East Coast, US More info | May 14, 2013 08:49 | #14 suecassidy wrote in post #15929847 I don't see cropping into the top of the head to be a problem as much as an artistic choice. I do that all the time on purpose. I love the high angle of the shot. When he looked up, it caused the sky to be reflected in his eyes, which makes them sparkle. I think the high angle works with his expression as well because it makes him look small and vulnerable and it IS the perspective by which you view him most of the time. In THIS shot, it totally works. If he were my little boy, I would absolutely want that framed and on a table top. terrific! Oh! Thank you so much! You have made my day! rrblint wrote in post #15929881 I think that it is a very cute photo of a boy being a boy...Good job Whitney! Thank you! Yes, he is VERY much 'boy'. Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8
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