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May 24, 2013 12:32 |  #1

My first real try with OCF all shot with 35L.

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May 24, 2013 13:54 |  #2

came out great to me. did you use a softbox or umbrella with the OCF?


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May 24, 2013 14:39 |  #3

six3onei wrote in post #15963715 (external link)
came out great to me. did you use a softbox or umbrella with the OCF?

shot through an umbrella, thanks!


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May 24, 2013 14:47 |  #4

Your white balance and colors are all over the charts which in each individual shot might be fine, but shown as a set its a bit startling. The lighting is good, but the half body shots would be more flattering with a longer lens. She is a lovely girl and you captured her well.




  
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May 24, 2013 20:23 |  #5

That watermark is totally distracting. I think the first is the best of the set, except next time try and find level ground for the chair.




  
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May 24, 2013 21:13 |  #6

Lookin' good


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May 24, 2013 22:27 |  #7

I mostly agree with what everyone else has said. I like each image individually, but as a set, the processing is so different that they don't go together real well (I have a really bad habit of this too!).

I agree that the watermark is a little distracting, but really not that big of an issue. Maybe just lower the opacity of it a little bit.




  
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May 25, 2013 01:34 |  #8

I like them, first 3 being my favorites.




  
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May 25, 2013 09:43 |  #9

I really like the lighting on #1.


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May 25, 2013 09:49 |  #10

davidmtml wrote in post #15964990 (external link)
I mostly agree with what everyone else has said. I like each image individually, but as a set, the processing is so different that they don't go together real well (I have a really bad habit of this too!).

I agree that the watermark is a little distracting, but really not that big of an issue. Maybe just lower the opacity of it a little bit.

Agree with Davis. She is a cutie, I am sure you will get more sessions!


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May 25, 2013 16:42 |  #11

I find grabbing a few images and watching them through as a slideshow helps to point out differences in processing. It is very easy to wind up with differences in skin tone


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