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May 28, 2013 23:25 |  #1

Sharing these for some input/feedback/critiqu​e.
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May 29, 2013 10:26 |  #2

Good moments and energy.
Sometimes the framing is a bit off (#2) or some people are blocking other people, but that's hard to avoid in a fast moving event like this.
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May 29, 2013 15:24 |  #3

You shot some really nice photos. Keep posting them!




  
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May 29, 2013 16:31 |  #4

This is a pretty good set! :)


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May 29, 2013 18:25 |  #5

René Damkot wrote in post #15979139 (external link)
Good moments and energy.
Sometimes the framing is a bit off (#2) or some people are blocking other people, but that's hard to avoid in a fast moving event like this.
Nice.

Thanks alot. Yea, I was trying to avoid getting people in the shot so i had to reframe. somethings you can't help.


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May 29, 2013 18:29 |  #6

Thanks for the feedbacks:)

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Jun 01, 2013 14:01 |  #7

Some good shots in these, with a nice look to them as well - contrasty but clean. A couple of times some feet have gone missing though - especially in #2 this is a little problem as you can't tell if he's just holding her, or if she's suspended in the air - being able to see who dancers is often important ... in most of the others it hasn't affected the image too much though, especially with big groups ...


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Jun 02, 2013 05:36 |  #8

Owain Shaw wrote in post #15989409 (external link)
Some good shots in these, with a nice look to them as well - contrasty but clean. A couple of times some feet have gone missing though - especially in #2 this is a little problem as you can't tell if he's just holding her, or if she's suspended in the air - being able to see who dancers is often important ... in most of the others it hasn't affected the image too much though, especially with big groups ...

Thanks for the tip. I can see what you mean with #2. I was shooting these from the audience so my priority was to frame my shots without having other people in the audience get into my shots as well. luckily I was able to get photo passes for next year so Ill take your advices in mind. :)

I'm also considering buying a 17-40 for larger stage pieces and dance company-sized crews


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Jun 02, 2013 08:47 |  #9

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Thanks for the tip. I can see what you mean with #2. I was shooting these from the audience so my priority was to frame my shots without having other people in the audience get into my shots as well. luckily I was able to get photo passes for next year so Ill take your advices in mind. :)

I'm also considering buying a 17-40 for larger stage pieces and dance company-sized crews

That makes complete sense as to why the photo is framed higher up, as are some of the others (but in those it doesn't matter) but you've done a great job from the audience, and I'd say definitely earned yourself a pass ... good work!

Wide is good when you get to photograph at close quarters, although if you start working in theatres you might find yourself wanting something long more than something wide - to get at the right level so as not to shoot from below you have to be quite far back in a larger theatre and something like a 70-200 becomes desirable. If you can work close quarters at the right level, wide will be good to have as well ...


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Jun 03, 2013 00:04 |  #10

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That makes complete sense as to why the photo is framed higher up, as are some of the others (but in those it doesn't matter) but you've done a great job from the audience, and I'd say definitely earned yourself a pass ... good work!

Wide is good when you get to photograph at close quarters, although if you start working in theatres you might find yourself wanting something long more than something wide - to get at the right level so as not to shoot from below you have to be quite far back in a larger theatre and something like a 70-200 becomes desirable. If you can work close quarters at the right level, wide will be good to have as well ...

A 70-200 is definitely already in my list of lens to buy especially since I mostly do portraits. I even choose the 28-135 over my 24-105 just for that extra reach.
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Jun 03, 2013 05:54 |  #11

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A 70-200 is definitely already in my list of lens to buy especially since I mostly do portraits. I even choose the 28-135 over my 24-105 just for that extra reach.
btw I took a look at your work. Nice shots

I'm looking to pick up a 70-200 (would be happy with a Sigma non-OS) when I can - I bought my kit for when I was working much smaller theatres, for which it was ideal, but I've found myself in larger ones of late, and the lack of reach is sometimes felt ... I work with what I have, and I'm not unhappy with it but now I'm working in bigger spaces, I need to think about getting what I need to do that job as well.

With those two lenses offering similar max. apertures, I think you made a good choice ...

Thanks, for looking and for commenting, appreciated! :)


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Apr 19, 2018 19:50 |  #12

Love the colouring on the colour ones man! It's sometimes hard to correctly WB these types of performances! Well done!


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