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Jun 07, 2013 23:29 |  #1

Please take a look at my flickr, and let me know what everyone thinks. These were all shoots that were done for friends.

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Jun 07, 2013 23:32 |  #2

Not bad, the thing that sticks out most to me in a number of them is that that you need to soften your light-sources. The first few are really hard




  
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Jun 08, 2013 00:02 |  #3

I'm sure the Clients are happy. I only saw the newborn shoot....is it up to the quality of good newborn photogs...no. Is it okay for a first attempt. Yes.

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Jun 08, 2013 09:20 |  #4

VERY simple "outdoor studio"
There's a step-by-step WB & exposure workflow in post #15.

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Jun 08, 2013 20:07 |  #5

I looked through some of the baby shoot. Looks like you missed focus in a few of those shots, but all and all not bad for a first shoot.

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Jun 08, 2013 21:52 |  #6

Please post a few photos for critique.




  
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Jun 14, 2013 16:42 |  #7

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Jun 14, 2013 18:46 |  #8

Harsh lighting, not saying it cant be fixed in post but watch it:

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Jun 14, 2013 19:45 |  #9

Skin is overprocessed for my taste.




  
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