My first real wedding

Let me just mention that these look great for your first "real" wedding.

Here's my take.

1. Nice shot. IMO, it would have been better with her more towards the left of the frame. Processing looks a little flat.
2. Nice shot. You have one shot at a straight angle?
3. I would have maybe shot this looser to get a better sense of the swinging chair and maybe some movement. Maybe get a bigger smile from her too?
4. His eyes being opened ruins the shot. Also, their faces are smushed too much.
5. Looks like you had some spotty lighting, but a good cap. Would have been better if the ring was visible, but that's a hit or miss depending on the angle.
6. Good cap of the ring being put on. Was this live or staged?
7. This is a better version of #4. Hate the processing.
8. The girl chimping in the foreground ruins the shot. Hate the processing.
9. Nice shot. Looks flat though...

I didn't like where you did those special effects. They are so right in your face effects and I like using effects when you almost can't tell. Overall, you did awesome. Beautiful light, exposure and tones. Lovely series.

nicksan thanks. again all noted.

Alex, which effects(pics?)? because i never added an effects to any of those photos. different PP maybe.

thanks though.

They are shots that had me thinking wow! Great job, tac sharp. As mentioned I wasn't so sure about the processing of the last two on the second set, but great shots.

in the second to the last, i was planning to make it black and white but then i decided to make the saturation -85 only instead of a 100, to make it different from others. I made it darker to add a little drama. just me.

for the last one, it's like dreamly/high key thing but what made me love the shot is by how the bride looks so happy. she's looks like experiencing overwhelming joy. so regardless of the PP style, the expression of the bride made the picture for me. again, just me.

thank you though. you CC will only make me a better photog. may help someone else too who's reading all your feedback. again thanks.

Wow! That is excellent for your 1st one. They should love these!! I really like the last two, especially the one as the B&G walkign away after the ceremony. Great job!! You should do very well in this industry.

Just a thought...in the 2nd to last image, if you reduce the saturation of every color except red, it would look fantastic too.

Buckeye1 wrote in post #16114669
Just a thought...in the 2nd to last image, if you reduce the saturation of every color except red, it would look fantastic too.

Thanks. I will try that.

Buckeye1 wrote in post #16114660
Wow! That is excellent for your 1st one. They should love these!! I really like the last two, especially the one as the B&G walkign away after the ceremony. Great job!! You should do very well in this industry.

Thank you. Really appreciate it.

Nice Pics. You look awesome in these pics. Good job!