michael88 Senior Member 889 posts Joined Nov 2005 Location: Mesa, AZ More info | Jan 20, 2006 23:16 | #1 This time the kids were in bed and my wife got to pose for me. Where can I improve? Let me know what you think.
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bolantej Goldmember 3,780 posts Likes: 7 Joined Mar 2005 Location: CAlifornia More info | Jan 20, 2006 23:45 | #2 I don't see anything. could be me???
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Jan 20, 2006 23:46 | #3 I am trying to fix the link. Mike
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SkipSouza Cream of the Crop  26,204 posts Likes: 7 Joined Mar 2005 Location: The Left Coast in the Land of Fruits and Nuts More info | Jan 20, 2006 23:46 | #4 Sorry Michael, just the dreaded X Bless the recently fallen and their family and friends.
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Jan 21, 2006 00:11 | #5 Hopefully this is fixed. Let me know if it isn't. Mike
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::John:: Cream of the Crop More info | Jan 21, 2006 00:17 | #6 I can see them now - and delighted I am to be able to. I am the proud owner of the Peleng 8mm Fisheye lens
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Jan 21, 2006 00:21 | #7 Thank you kiwibloke, I really appreciate your comments. Mike
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minime9us Member 205 posts Joined Jan 2006 More info | Jan 21, 2006 02:07 | #8 these are very nice, how did you get that background so nice and black while keeping here exposed correctly?
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ronosmena Senior Member  902 posts Joined Sep 2005 Location: RSM, California More info | Jan 21, 2006 02:09 | #9 tones are just right....great shots by the way, what was your setup -------------- R O N --------------
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Jan 21, 2006 05:29 | #10 Thamk you minime9us and ronosmena for your comments. As far as getting the background black: that is the result of having a nice distance from the model to the background, about seven feet in this case. I also have the main light relatively close to the model. Mike
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CurtisN Master Flasher  19,129 posts Likes: 11 Joined Apr 2005 Location: Northern Illinois, US More info | Jan 21, 2006 05:44 | #11 I really like these. I think they could stand to be brightened up a half stop or so. "If you're not having fun, your pictures will reflect that." - Joe McNally
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simatbirch Member 94 posts Joined Jan 2006 More info | Jan 21, 2006 06:37 | #12 I agree, nice portraits. Maybe a touch more saturation and that extra half a stop. 20D, 18-55 kit, 50 f/1.4, 100 f/2.8 Macro, 24-70 f/2.8L, Sigma 50-500 f/4-6.3, 580EX
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yellow_belly Member 142 posts Joined Mar 2004 More info | Jan 21, 2006 08:17 | #13 I like all of them
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BearLeeAlive All butt cheeks and string.  30,200 posts Likes: 70 Joined May 2005 Location: Calgary, AB More info | Jan 21, 2006 09:26 | #14 Great shots, a lovely model who poses well. I would like to see the exposure bumped at little would be my only thought to change anything. -JIM-
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BIGTUFFGUY Goldmember  2,252 posts Joined Jan 2006 Location: Montreal, Canada More info | Jan 21, 2006 09:28 | #15 no strong shadows, well lit ( could be a tad bit lighter though)
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1 thing I would personally prefer is that #1,3,4 were in portrait and not lanscape style as to me there is too much black negative space but that is easily remedied with a little cropping 