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ekfaysal
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Jun 21, 2013 11:34 |  #1

Guys, i'm a learner, hoping to improve my compositions.. So , here are some photos to critique.
Critique everything like Composition/Post processing etc.

1. (i was thinking of getting rid of the people from the scene. ur suggestions please)

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Lake saiful malook Naran (external link) by faysalelahi (external link), on Flickr


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Lake saiful malook naran (external link) by faysalelahi (external link), on Flickr

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Lake saiful malook (external link) by faysalelahi (external link), on Flickr

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Lake saiful malook (external link) by faysalelahi (external link), on Flickr

5. Now panoramas
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Panorama Saifulmalook (external link) by faysalelahi (external link), on Flickr

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Jun 21, 2013 14:32 |  #2

All of them look great but the 1st one looks awesome.


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Jun 21, 2013 14:38 |  #3

I too really like the first one in particular. Maybe its my monitor here at work, but they seem a little cold to me; maybe shift the color temperature towards the reds just a bit?


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Jun 22, 2013 12:51 |  #4

Definitely get rid of the people - i.e. shoot at a different time. The scene is nice but the light isn't - sunrise/sunset would be better here. Too many distractions with all the people. Your best one is probably 5 but it could use better light as well and composition changes. I like the snow that leads you down the mountain so I think if you focused more on that area you could come up with a more interesting photo.




  
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sally_tomato
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Jun 22, 2013 22:24 |  #5

#5 is great. the rest...the people/tents etc dont work for me...




  
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