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Jul 03, 2013 06:43 |  #1

Hi,

I would appreciate your feedback on this Portrait.

What do you think of the lighting?

What do you think of the retouching?

Anything that you think could be better or improved on?

Thanks in advance.

Craig

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Jul 03, 2013 08:37 |  #2

Looks very good :)
I myself would love to see a little more colour in her skin, but she might be slightly pale to begin with!?




  
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Jul 03, 2013 09:39 |  #3

Lighting on the face is very good, minor shadow under the nose (main light too high?). Might be a touch hot on her left arm. Nicely done overall :)




  
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Jul 03, 2013 09:40 |  #4

the color seems bit washed out. you also may want to either clone out the hair sticking out or liquify it in a bit.


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Jul 03, 2013 10:54 as a reply to  @ mike_311's post |  #5

Thanks for the tips so far.

The uploaded image seems more washed out than the original
for some reason.


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Jul 03, 2013 11:14 |  #6

I'd add a touch more red to her lips and that's about all.


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