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Jul 04, 2013 13:10 |  #1

If you ask my grandson to pose for a picture, you get this awful fake smile, lol...caught him off guard at a recent LAX game....

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Jul 04, 2013 16:58 |  #2

Nice capture of the moment. On my monitor, his skin tones look a bit green. I tried an edit where I adjusted the white balance. His face also seemed a bit dark so I lightened his face a little and darkened the background a little to add some contrast.

I also cloned out the orange piece out of the frame as well.

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Jul 04, 2013 18:18 |  #3

navydoc wrote in post #16091659 (external link)
Nice capture of the moment. On my monitor, his skin tones look a bit green. I tried an edit where I adjusted the white balance. His face also seemed a bit dark so I lightened his face a little and darkened the background a little to add some contrast.

I also cloned out the orange piece out of the frame as well.

Thanks for the edit...actually, he has quite a tan that shows up in my monitor, your edit looks red :)

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Jul 04, 2013 18:32 as a reply to  @ DarenM's post |  #4

I'm sure others will chime in on the skin tones. I attribute any reddness in his face to exertion. :D


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Jul 04, 2013 19:16 |  #5

I'd leave the orange water bottle cap in the picture; I think it contributes to the overall image...


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Jul 04, 2013 19:35 |  #6

I like the skin tone in the first picture. It makes him look like he just worked out. The orange thing had to go, though.




  
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Jul 05, 2013 10:34 |  #7

Orange thingy should go and I think I'd clone out the sweat drop departing his nose too. I agree that the original has a greenish cast to his face; but Gene's edit is perhaps a bit too bright there.


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Jul 05, 2013 14:44 as a reply to  @ Qbx's post |  #8

He had just gotten through working out, just came off the field and was taking a break...i thought the sweat drop at the end of the nose added to the picture..sort of told the story


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Jul 06, 2013 05:23 |  #9

I see lots of sweat to tell the story - the nose drop just aint pretty.


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