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Jul 08, 2013 21:44 | #1

Finally took an image I really like. Please review and let me know what I did well, but more importantly what I can improve upon.

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Jul 08, 2013 22:19 | #2

I'm not into all the negative space above it or next too it...so I would crop it tighter as for color and sharpness you did a good job....I would do this

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Jul 09, 2013 08:19 | #3

I like those edits Stan. I definitely need to work on my composition skills. Thanks for the input. Others?

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Jul 09, 2013 09:35 | #4

I like the edits, too. Some other things to think about: https://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=578150

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Jul 11, 2013 17:52 | #5

imho, needs more of the stem. Coneflowers can usually find on their own enough to get the flower itself more vertically positioned in the frame. Very nice bokeh in the background, but the yellow flower distracts my eye from the subject flower.

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