scottbloos Mostly Lurking 14 posts Joined Feb 2010 More info | Jul 16, 2013 22:42 | #1 Hey all, Im working on my new logo, and I could use a little help with the slogan. Im thinking something along the lines of " Your moments, your memories, your life, held still" or "your moments, your memories, your life, to hold" I want to portray the materialization of these experiences, but I am having trouble with the last part of the phrase. Any and all help would be so much appreciated! Thanks
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OhLook insufferably pedantic. I can live with that.  24,903 posts Gallery: 105 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 16329 Joined Dec 2012 Location: California: SF Bay Area More info | Jul 16, 2013 23:08 | #2 ". . . for you to hold" PRONOUN ADVISORY: OhLook is a she. | Comments welcome
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Tony8 Member 58 posts Joined Mar 2013 Location: Teesside, UK More info | Jul 17, 2013 12:49 | #3 Bit wordy - agree about dropping the "your life" bit. If it doesn't need to include the word "held" or "hold", how about:
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1000WordsPhotography Senior Member 525 posts Likes: 141 Joined Aug 2009 More info | Jul 17, 2013 13:39 | #4 |
markweaver Senior Member  458 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2010 Location: Fairfax VA More info | I'de go with "your moments, your memories". Keep it short and pity. Mark
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philodelphi Goldmember  More info | Jul 23, 2013 10:01 | #6 How about "Your moments, your memories, captured forever" Sony DSC-RX100M2 • α7R III / ILCE-7RM3 • Cyber-shot DSC-RX10 IV | Voigtlander 65mm F2 Macro APO-Lanthar | Venus Optics Laowa 15mm f/4 Macro | Sony FE 24-240mm F3.5-6.3 OSS • Sonnar T* FE 55mm F1.8 ZA • FE 24mm f/1.4 GM | Samyang 35mm f/1.4 ED AS UMC | Canon MP-E 65mm f/2.8 1-5x Macro Photo • EF 100mm f/2.8 Macro USM | Sigma 100-400mm f/5-6.3 DG OS HSM | Tokina Firin 20mm f/2 FE MF | Tamron 28-75mm F2.8 Di III RXD
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Fernando Goldmember  1,628 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2007 Location: Round Rock, TX More info | Jul 23, 2013 15:10 | #7 Maybe I'm not a sentimentalist but when I go to a website I don't care what the slogan says, or if there even is one. If I notice it and it's overly cheesy it will trigger the "amateur" flag in my brain. Fuji convert - Ping me if you have any Fuji gear or legacy glass you're moving.
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myzander Junior Member  28 posts Joined Jun 2013 Location: Ohio More info | Jul 23, 2013 15:20 | #8 philodelphi wrote in post #16146198  "Your moments, your memories, distilled into fine digital files for you to post to social networking sites for the NSA to keep forever"
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Jul 23, 2013 18:04 | #9 "Stand still, I'm trying to shoot you" Canon 5d mkii | Canon 17-40/4L | Tamron 24-70/2.8 | Canon 85/1.8 | Canon 135/2L
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Six6Sicks Senior Member  470 posts Likes: 23 Joined Apr 2012 Location: IL More info | Jul 23, 2013 18:13 | #10 Your moments, your memories, your life, your anamnesis, your awareness, your camera-eye, your cognizance, your consciousness, your dead-eye, your flashback, your memorization, your mind, your mind's eye, your mindfulness, your recall, your recapture, your recognition, your recollection, your reflection, your remembrance, your reminiscence, your retention, your retentiveness, your retrospection, your subconsciousness, your thought, your money, my pocket. For life. Gear: Yes.
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Jul 23, 2013 18:41 | #11 Six6Sicks wrote in post #16147623 your money, my pocket. For life.
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Mark0159 I say stupid things all the time  More info | Jul 24, 2013 23:04 | #12 How about this, you don't need one. your a photographer not a poet. Let your photos do the talking. Mark
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madhatter04 Goldmember 1,930 posts Likes: 52 Joined Oct 2006 Location: Southern California More info | Jul 25, 2013 01:20 | #13 Yes, pleeeeeeease don't. LOL. Capture, memories, your life, hold on, all used time and time and time and time again. Ditch a tagline altogether. You don't need one and certainly not on a logo. Designer // Art Director // Photographer
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