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I need some feedback on this Music Video !

 
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Jul 25, 2013 04:52 |  #1

https://www.youtube.co​m/watch?v=h4zRSRACRec (external link)

Let me know your thoughts, any feedback is highly appreciated thanks!




  
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Jul 25, 2013 08:55 |  #2

Overall its a strong effort. The camera work, editing, and color is really good. My main suggestions would be to eliminate the home scenes because they are boring, add more other video of his home town and lifestyle to balance the rapping scenes, and add live performance scenes to make a bland song more interesting and exciting. Since the song is all about Mom and family it would be great to include them.


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Jul 27, 2013 08:10 |  #3

not bad. I would agree with sspellman on some points and that would be to add some elements of family in it.


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Aug 02, 2013 12:43 |  #4

Went to look and you've deleted it heh




  
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Aug 04, 2013 06:33 |  #5

Re-added sorry! Feedback is welcome again please




  
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Sep 10, 2013 17:26 |  #6

Really nice effort there...

Great tune too..


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